time warps…

your lips brushing mine,
hands gliding on nervous skin,
pendulums swinging to a full halt,
the world seems to pause everytime,
like a stopped clock…


your lips brushing mine,
hands gliding on nervous skin,
pendulums swinging to a full halt,
the world seems to pause everytime,
like a stopped clock…
you better buy new batteries
@hellboy -> i would but i don’t think they would help! haha
Well put, short to the point, not overtly obvious but still comprehensible. I like it very much. My type of poem (or at least on of my types of poems….
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hello may! how are you?! hope to see you again soon! mwah!
I like this poem of yours. Short and the words used gave me an impact.
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O/T — Care to exchange links?
Stopped clock?
Something that I yearn
Going back in time is another wish list
Wait, I think time just stopped for me
For a while…
Very nice poem.. I like.
Thanks for dropping by my blog.
at last. i found someone who writes poem. very nicely written. the true sensation of being in love. it’s like being time-warped. here, jonell.
I like your poem very much. Thanks for stopping by my site.:) I love Celtic music too!
tama nga change battery lang kailangan dyan
salamat pala sa pagbisita
that poem is beautiful