sodden blues…

blues…

i am alone,

in this room so gloom,

embraced by the colour blue,

inside this poem,

the only words i ever truely knew…

 

~ by Mayang on February 21, 2007.

Posted in Ahhhhhs, Half-sighs, Nonsense, Obsessions, Personal

13 Responses to “sodden blues…”

  1. Loneliness enchances the blueness
    However blueness may mean calmness serenity

    zeroimpact said this on February 21, 2007 at 4:58 am | Reply

  2. just hit your head n the solace of your pillow.. :-)

    richard said this on February 22, 2007 at 6:19 am | Reply

  3. a poet writes with thoughts causing obsessive emotions feelings sentiments drastic overflow but because of accusations of obscurity poets no longer write no longer scribble no longer but left with the solstice of sentiments feelings emotions obsessive back to the abstract concept of thoughts.

    a sample of a failed attempt to write in prose poetry. such a new genre, difficult to master.

    emo.

    phonologist said this on February 22, 2007 at 9:08 pm | Reply

  4. @phonologist

    there’s no failure coz there’s no attempt of sorts made here. i’m neither a poet nor an emo specialist-wanna-be, if that’s the genre you say i’m trying to fit myself and my writings into.

    i write coz i feel to, not to amaze, woo, wow or impress anyone coz it’s not my style. i simply write my thoughts out, free them from the bondage of this crazed sleep-deprived mind…

    thanks for the enlightening if not kind words you have obliged my page with, now if you don’t mind i’ll go back to my attempts to regaining control of my sanity.

    Mayang said this on February 22, 2007 at 9:31 pm | Reply

  5. Your writing is beautiful in it’s own special way. Wish that you sleep well tonight.

    tobeme said this on February 23, 2007 at 1:29 am | Reply

  6. You are never alone; though you may feel that way. I love the way you wrote this stanza.

    (:

    Kyels said this on February 26, 2007 at 5:57 pm | Reply

  7. both image and words are astounding…

    javy said this on February 26, 2007 at 8:17 pm | Reply

  8. nice poem as usual,Mayang :)

    ghee said this on February 27, 2007 at 2:43 pm | Reply

  9. Unique and moving.

    tobeme said this on March 2, 2007 at 7:35 pm | Reply

  10. intricate…but soothing…what is in blue? peace…refreshing

    sexy mom said this on March 10, 2007 at 8:56 pm | Reply

  11. and i’m here to kick your ass for an update!

    hellboy said this on March 11, 2007 at 4:39 pm | Reply

  12. whoah! what a ponderous word, “sodden” I initially thought it was mispelled unintentionally :D

    On the brighter side, thoughts will just flow amiably when we are in a sodden mood, so avail them with justifiable worth… I did it a couple of times. ;)

    ~ baduy

    baduy said this on March 14, 2007 at 2:56 am | Reply

  13. now thing of the color red again
    that can’t be true what you have said
    who are you speaking for?

    C

    C said this on March 4, 2008 at 10:12 am | Reply

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